 Wings Dipped in Silver 2009-11-01 . chapter 1hmm it's interesting, i can't wait for more. |
 FabioandRichard4Ever 2009-09-11 . chapter 1this is good. really good. |
 Uber Ghidorah 2009-05-22 . chapter 1I agree with everyone. You must continue writing this. It's UberAwesome! |
 mpkio2 2009-05-19 . chapter 1You have to continue writing this!
It's just too good of a story not to carry on writing!
UPDATE ASAP! PLEASE? |
 Don 77 2009-04-19 . chapter 1 Dude you need to update so please update |
 stitch8000 2009-04-05 . chapter 1very cool plz more and soon plz |
 Nanashi Chimera 2008-12-07 . chapter 1Really good start. I am looking forward to if you update it. I know that you only put up the first chapter almost a year ago but I would like to see this story make some progress.
Nanashi Chimera
p.s. the name seems fine to me. |
 Count of Death 2008-07-16 . chapter 1 Excellent story! I loved the concept. Are you still writing it though? I hope you do. |
 clara200 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Hehe! I find the irony of Ash being turned into a pokemon and now being trained delisious. |
 Rogue7 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Interesting chapter, there's a few spelling mistakes, I won't point them out here, but it was good. It's great to see that you're still writing.
Keep up the good work |
 Alex Warlorn 2008-04-09 . chapter 1s e r e b i i . n e t has a pokedex built right into the site. You can use that.
I'm wondering why he didn't just transfer Ash's memories into himself. Or was he worried about being contaminated by them? And if Pikachu thing this Pichu was really a thing of evil... why didn't he electrocute it on the spot?
When during the verse does this take place?
Shouldn't Dexster of had a date in it?
So what is this imposter going to do about Brock, Misty, and their pokemon teams?
And won't the first telepath they come across, pokemon or human, know very quickly that this person is not what they appear to be? |