This is so beautiful, you've given it so much depth in just the prologue. Your writing is so original, please continue and finish this!

OMG THIS IS SO GOOD! LOL, I want to subscribe! Update soon, please!

i cant wait for the real chapter you know how to get someone to get into a story i cant wait!!

Awesome possum!AWDORABLE>

i like it so far! you've made it really interesting and it hasn't even begun! i can't wait til the real story begins.

Wow.
Strong intro!
I love stories when they tell you a different side of the story.
U should read Wicked!
Its about the Wicked Witch of the West! Turns out shes not really wicked. Who actually knows the true nature of evil anyway?
(i strongly recommend the musical play Wicked, its amazing!!)

PLEASE UPDATE

Gosh, the way you write is so beautiful. With every sentence, you draw the readers in, compelling them to read further. I just love it. The intrigue and slight magic all tie in with the concept of Snow White and that I think is marvelous. Great job!

tats nice...i think i can relate why hinata fits the role of 'snow white'...isn't it obvious? *winks*

i also can think of hinata in numerous fairytales coz she's so like the princesses...a damsel in distress kind of situation like 'cinderella' & 'little mermaid' but i guess if little mermaid, the hero has to be naruto (clue: density)

anyways, nice one...and i HOPE you'll update soon!! so, what happens to the other fics? *waiting*

love the starting and hope to read the ending

really good. sounds cool, whats next?

cannt wait to read

wow
really great prologue
it really makes me want to read what comes next
Now that I think about it...
Snow White didn't have a name!
O_o

I can't wait to hear the real story behind Snow White! :)

Really interesting beginnging :) I hope you continue it!

Thats a very good start to a story! Can't wait til the next chapter comes ^^