|Reviews for Firsts|
| An Aspiring Author 4/21/08 . chapter 1
this story was interesting, a little hard to follow but very good. nice job!
| The Luna Complex 4/10/08 . chapter 1
Oh, wow wow wow. That was... amazing. Especially the end. Woww. Teddy Flemming. Hah.
| yellow 13 4/10/08 . chapter 1
ha very funny
| BookkeeperThe 4/10/08 . chapter 1
rotfl! naughty naughty, sirius!