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An Aspiring Author 4/21/08 . chapter 1this story was interesting, a little hard to follow but very good. nice job! |
The Luna Complex 4/10/08 . chapter 1Oh, wow wow wow. That was... amazing. Especially the end. Woww. Teddy Flemming. Hah. |
yellow 13 4/10/08 . chapter 1 ha very funny |
BookkeeperThe 4/10/08 . chapter 1rotfl! naughty naughty, sirius! |