 reader 2008-06-14 . chapter 8 good chapter. how does bb react now that he knowes. does he try to after slade. update soon |
 Hidden Iris 2008-06-14 . chapter 8I really like this series! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Raven of Alaska 2008-06-14 . chapter 8So, Slade's planning to go to war with BB and Cy's homeland. Cunning trickster, I'll say that much. And with Trigon to back him... is there any force that can stop him? What's with him hurting Raven, anyways?
Sincerely,
Raven of Alaska |
 reader 2008-06-08 . chapter 7 nice chapter. i cant wait to see what happens next. does bb see raes wounds |
 Somewhere In Time 2008-05-19 . chapter 7Hurrah, Robin does something! But he seems so distant...Ah well, I suppose that's how he is. |
 reader 2008-05-07 . chapter 6 pirate robin. any pirate songs. update soon |
 Somewhere In Time 2008-05-05 . chapter 6I'm so glad Robin's in the story now!! I hope he'll do more than just save lives next chapter!! |
 Pseudonym Jareth 2008-05-05 . chapter 6Smart... but the stars falling(aliens)..well... it was a bit random... just saying..but at least you put them in! and a reply would be nice NOW... ah yes, and not much errors i spot!
Anime Queen |
 Pseudonym Jareth 2008-05-05 . chapter 5mn...nice scene! i like your chapters but they are a bit ..short..talking as a reader..as a writer, i don't blame you, because i do too...now..a reply to my reviews would be nice...
Anime Queen |
 Pseudonym Jareth 2008-05-05 . chapter 3VERY GOOD...update faster!!
Anime Queen |
 Raven of Alaska 2008-05-05 . chapter 6So, Robin found them. I wonder how they're going to return to the palace. Will Robin let them leave his ship?
Sincerely,
Raven of Alaska |
 timkhj 2008-04-15 . chapter 5Unusual and interesting so far! Good job! |
 reader 2008-04-14 . chapter 5 bringing in starfire huh. love how you have bb play the flute for raven. does he play for her again. update soon |
 reader 2008-04-13 . chapter 4 choppy to begin with. interesting. update soon |
 katy 2008-04-12 . chapter 4 very good! i liked how you incorperated most of the characters instead of just bb and rae. and how you found a way to explain all their appearances and powers. loved it tasha, (i told you i would!) |