beautiful. you captured his pain very well, and as I said many times your description is more than just awesome, and your writing style is very beautiful.

This was beautiful, you never cease to amaze me when it comes to descriptions. I always find them amazing, and that's putting it lightly.

You make Kakashi the most realistic, compared to many I've seen, mostly because all his emotions and memories of his past haunt him.

Anywho, this was wonderful. As always, best of luck. c-ya!

Another wonderful, heartbreaking fic... The world goes on around him, not realising one of her children is a walking corpse. Loved how descriptive it was, particularly the last paragraph with team seven oblivious to all his pain... it was interesting to read a good character sketch done in first person. I've never sucessfully managed that before :)

v v good. love it. very sad and pensieve. great ending. awesome language control.

Awesome job! *o*

The imagery was very good and it's on a level way above most of the stuff that is posted on this site. Good ending!

Really, you're the first author I've ever bothered to review! Keep writing- you have talent!

-Lala

So sad :'( but really well done : )