 Mrs.Twilight 2009-08-21 . chapter 4Hey really like it so far! It's really great! So do u plan on contininuing with it? I totally think u should xoxo Mrs.Twilight |
 Tam 2008-11-29 . chapter 4 OMG, i speechless that is such a good story.
please please update it soon.
i hope that mattie is going to be alright |
 wounded-heart 2008-05-30 . chapter 4Amazing story. I love that you started off with him watching Mattie and lead to a hostage situation to get back at Sal/Ric. It is exactly the way the actual episode should have went. I prefer your version. Keep up the good work. I am excited for the next chapter. |
 Belle_91 2008-04-28 . chapter 4 Hope you update soon :)
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 BaByGaL101 2008-04-25 . chapter 4 I lOiiK iiT. MattiildA iS mY fAvourIte chaRacTer nd I loiiK cAsSie nd RiiC. ThiiS is A coOl aS stOrY nD ii ThiiNK u ShoUlD uPdaTe sOoN! YeRr =] |
 Nina 2008-04-25 . chapter 4 Wow! I like this story.. I like how you're potraying the characters. Update son please!!
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 Saiesaie 2008-04-24 . chapter 4Yay! I'm so happy you updated. Loved Ric's reaction - it was exactly as I would have pictured it. Cassie's great, keeping Ric calm and all. Johnny is such a creep and you portrayed Matilda's emotions really well! I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more. Excellent writing! |
 Murusakai42 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Wow!
I saw that episode on TV with Matilda. I wondered what would have happened. Great writing! |
 Saiesaie 2008-04-14 . chapter 3Talk about a cliffhanger! This chapter was incredible. It played out exactly like I would imagined it to have gone in the show, you're a really talented writer. You're doing great with the continuity as well - I haven't noticed anything that you've missed. Can't wait to see Ric's reaction in the next chapter... with his temper and all!! |
 Belle_91 2008-04-14 . chapter 2 o cliffhanger! hope you're gonna udate soon! i always thought that johnny spying on matilda was an interesting place to take the storyline! xx |
 Saiesaie 2008-04-12 . chapter 2Nice cliffhanger lol! Really can't wait to read more... this is probably the only H&A story I'm reading right now! I wonder how Ric will react... Update soon! |
 Matty and Luke forever 2008-04-11 . chapter 1This is a really great story :D Can't wait for an update! xx |
 Saiesaie 2008-04-11 . chapter 1This is great. I always wondered what would have happened if Johnny had actually taken Matilda in that episode. I'd love to read the next chapters 'cause this sounds really good! |