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| Wohitzi 2008-05-24 ch 5,  | abuseAww! Cute. I can totally imagine something like this happening if Shikamaru ever had kids. |
| P.O.J.A 2008-04-23 ch 5, | abusesigh, another refreshing drabble! it's good to read some short and cute things once in a while, esp since everyone these days are updating with 20 page long stories lol! why is he questioning how long it would last? does this mean something angst or tragedy or maybe a fight (then great make-up sex after) with temari is in store? i'm totally anxious to read the next one, so keep up the good work Jakia ;) P.S. otosan/otousan/Tou-san are all 'father' in japanese so you were correct. otouto is 'little brother' in japanese, where niisan is 'older brother' so again, you had your stuff in gear no worries ^_^ |
| AnimegirlKiki 2008-04-21 ch 5, | abuseAW! So KAWAII!! (lol) Nice one! Good for a early monday. Lol,kiki |
| Junsui Chikyuu 2008-04-20 ch 5, | abuseaw, how cute. 1. Technically it's Otou-san, but Tou-san is shortened. You definitely need the U though. 2. Nii-san is big brother, so yeah, it would have been wrong. (for future reference, onee-san is big sister, imouto is little sister. However, you can't say these when referring to your own family to other people. Like the kids in this story could not say "My otou-san says..." because that would be impolite. He would have to say "Chichi says..." because that is the other word for father, and "haha" is the other word for "okaa-san". It's not hard to find if you google it, but just keep it in mind. |
| C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only 2008-04-19 ch 5, | abuse...Okay, I always DID wonder how Shikamaru looks with his hair all girly...LOL!! |
| Silver Shadow75 2008-04-19 ch 5, | abuseaw cute!! ! ! |
| kittydemon18 2008-04-19 ch 5, | abusetousan is just a less formal version of otousan, at least that's the impression i've gotten cute shot |
| Otaku Nayami 2008-04-17 ch 4, | abusethanx so much please post more chapters soon :D |
| P.O.J.A 2008-04-13 ch 4, | abusei just love ur drabbles! they're ridiculously cute, sweet, straight to the point, and coming fast i must say lol! good job drabblin jakia, ur wokr amazes me everytime. keep it up ;) |
| Wohitzi 2008-04-12 ch 3, | abuse-giggle- xD Oh jeez. The mental image of this fic is hilarious. Poor Shika. He's gonna be teased for the rest of his life. |
| Wohitzi 2008-04-12 ch 2, | abuseAw, cute. I can picture Temari being a bit nervous around children, seeing as she's not the gentlest person and probably worries she might get too angry or hurt them. Anyway, nice drabble. Very sweet and cute. |
| Wohitzi 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseHehe, cute. I imagine Shikamaru will be a lot more 'productive' in the future, huh? xD |
| Violetnightshade 2008-04-10 ch 3, | abuseI love it. I love it! I can so see Temari laughing her butt off. Funny that you should mention his fishnet fetish... ;) |
| Katterree Fengari 2008-04-10 ch 4, | abuseThese are all really cute. I'll second the idea that Temari is secretly afraid of motherhood. I would love to hear more details on femme!Shika's mission...but seriously, fishnets for everyone. Cute stuff! I love drabbles.. |
| AnimegirlKiki 2008-04-10 ch 4, | abuseAgain, Nice. Very win-win. I love shikaTema. Lol, kiki |