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marora
2009-10-20 . chapter 2
That actually makes sense. Her own mother died in childbirth and permanently screwed her younger brother. And a kunoichi would probably fear motherhood because it's not entirely under their control- they might be able to control exactly where the exploding tags go, but they can't control when the baby decides to come, or pregnancy and other such things.
Wohitzi
2009-10-10 . chapter 6
This is, like, the sweetest thing ever. I can completely imagine Shikamaru doing something like this.
Anzer'ke
2009-10-10 . chapter 6
...wow


That was awesome...but very, very depressing. Since I've recently missed a dozen or so Naruto chapters I'm gonna go ahead and hope this isn't canon. Wouldn't really surprise me if it was.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.
Wohitzi
2008-05-24 . chapter 5
Aww! Cute. I can totally imagine something like this happening if Shikamaru ever had kids.
P.O.J.A
2008-04-23 . chapter 5
sigh, another refreshing drabble! it's good to read some short and cute things once in a while, esp since everyone these days are updating with 20 page long stories lol! why is he questioning how long it would last? does this mean something angst or tragedy or maybe a fight (then great make-up sex after) with temari is in store? i'm totally anxious to read the next one, so keep up the good work Jakia ;)

P.S.

otosan/otousan/Tou-san are all 'father' in japanese so you were correct.
otouto is 'little brother' in japanese, where niisan is 'older brother' so again, you had your stuff in gear no worries ^_^
AnimegirlKiki
2008-04-21 . chapter 5
AW! So KAWAII!! (lol) Nice one! Good for a early monday. Lol,kiki
Junsui Chikyuu
2008-04-20 . chapter 5
aw, how cute.
1. Technically it's Otou-san, but Tou-san is shortened. You definitely need the U though.
2. Nii-san is big brother, so yeah, it would have been wrong. (for future reference, onee-san is big sister, imouto is little sister. However, you can't say these when referring to your own family to other people. Like the kids in this story could not say "My otou-san says..." because that would be impolite. He would have to say "Chichi says..." because that is the other word for father, and "haha" is the other word for "okaa-san". It's not hard to find if you google it, but just keep it in mind.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2008-04-19 . chapter 5
...Okay, I always DID wonder how Shikamaru looks with his hair all girly...LOL!!
Silver Shadow75
2008-04-19 . chapter 5
aw cute!! ! !
kittydemon18
2008-04-19 . chapter 5
tousan is just a less formal version of otousan, at least that's the impression i've gotten
cute shot
Nayami-Chan
2008-04-17 . chapter 4
thanx so much please post more chapters soon :D
P.O.J.A
2008-04-13 . chapter 4
i just love ur drabbles! they're ridiculously cute, sweet, straight to the point, and coming fast i must say lol! good job drabblin jakia, ur wokr amazes me everytime. keep it up ;)
Wohitzi
2008-04-12 . chapter 3
-giggle- xD Oh jeez. The mental image of this fic is hilarious. Poor Shika. He's gonna be teased for the rest of his life.
Wohitzi
2008-04-12 . chapter 2
Aw, cute. I can picture Temari being a bit nervous around children, seeing as she's not the gentlest person and probably worries she might get too angry or hurt them.

Anyway, nice drabble. Very sweet and cute.
Wohitzi
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Hehe, cute. I imagine Shikamaru will be a lot more 'productive' in the future, huh? xD
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