 maxine 11/30/01 . chapter 1 cool fic |
 maxine 11/30/01 . chapter 1 cool fic |
 Grifter 11/8/01 . chapter 1 Good story! Infatuation sucks, doesn't it? |
 Shoebleu 10/4/01 . chapter 1 Interesting perspective on things, and it's a pretty reasonable explanation of why things are how they are with Trent and Monique. The narrative style is a little too hard-edged and matter-of-fact for Trent, but it could have happened this way. And I like the ending for some reason, I think Monique and Jesse would be perfect together. |
 Tania 10/4/01 . chapter 1 this was awesome! i loved it all! great job, i think it's great you added Daria there with her crush on trent and him actually wanting her. |
 Thomas 10/1/01 . chapter 1If you're a REALLY big Trent fan this could be the fic for you. If not, chances are you'll be left wondering if this thing had a plot or not. |
 Ruthless Bunny 10/1/01 . chapter 1Oh, this is really, really good. It gets into the head of Trent, the heart of Trent and that space between where the slacker lives. What I liked about the monologue was that it explained the relationship, while preserving the mystery of it. I like how you acknowledge the Trent/Daria thing, and dismiss it as well. This is very, very, very good. Too good I think for the 15 year-old Sailor Moon Fans who skulk around . Ah well. Bunny) |