Good story, I like how they keep getting thrown together like it's destiny. Can't wait to see the next/last chapter. Keep Writing. Thanks for the story.

This story is so fun. I like the way you've captured the characters and kept it fun. Great job. Keep writing. Thanks for all your hard work.

Okay so instead of working on my school's yearbook, like a good little editor should, I've been reading your stuff. Okay, yeah, I'm a born lurker but I just HAD to review this story. So many emotions crossed through me whilst reading that I don't have enough time to desribe them all (it's a quarter to midnight! Eep!
So basically, out of all the things I enjoyed the thing that made get the **-eating grin was your characterizations. Not for one moment didn't I stop and think, "wow, this is really OOC."
Especially with Sasuke.
It's so easy for writers to just have him come back and realize, "HO-**! Sakura's a bombshell!" But the way you've written him is believable and endearing. Like "Aw, Saucy-kins is falling in l-o-v-e!"
All in all, I'm pumped about this story.
(Oh, and the fact that you got fanart from PET, SO JEALOUS!!)

please finish this story. i love it, and i want to know how they end up together,

the manga is so dramatic now with all of the team seven problems.
however, your story is absolutely a breath of fresh air & it just brings a wide smile to my face whenever i read those wonderful interactions between the three of them.
we're all looking forward to the final chapter!

I stumbled across your story and was instantly hooked! I love the ingenuity of the race as well as the flashback interactions.

I look forward to the next (and final?) chapter!

Thanks for sharing!

F.L.

Hahaha! Way to spice things up Chouji, Hilarious! The thought of Chouji doing that and innocent people running for their lives, what in image! Also what Sasuke did to protect Sakura how romantic~!(cheesy I know, but I can't help it)Creative way to bring in Humor! Tsunade is just one of the many people trying to help play match maker for the famous couple, with her having Sakura stick to Sasuke because of parol;)

I am absoultly and utterly in love with this magnificent story! Every chapter I read brings a big smile to my face!This chapter was full of Sasuke and Sakura romace that was very adorable when Sasuke was concerned for her when she got injured, it was believable and very romantic.

Sorry for another review on the same chapter, but I forgot to mention the outstanding details in this chapter, you can just picture all the summersaults, ribbon stealing and mid-air catching between Sasuke and Sakura!No wonder Samurai-PET!Drew an artwork for this chapter!You deserve it!!:D

"Was dropping Sakura a greater crime than abandoning Konoha?" (Hilarious line!)I love the idea of this race! Not just a normal race but a brilliantly made ninja race! It seems so fun!I relish in every Sasuke and Sakura moment in this story cause their so god!

Perfect combination of Humor, fun and romance.Character's are dead on, you captured everyones character P-E-R-F-E-C-T-L-Y, you make everyone loveable.(Capturing characters and not making them OOC and Each character loveable is a hard feat,but nope not for you!:)I really enjoy the evident mentions of a TentenxNeji paring too.

I could wright a story about how much I adore this storyjust from reading three chapters! But I'll stop so I can save some to write a review for your next chapter.:D (sorry If I wrote to long, but I figured Authors enjoy long lengthy reviews about how incredible their story is)

very nice story, it seemed light and airy, just a fun read, but the flashbacks add more color and depth to your fic its like reading two at the same time, it will be interesting to see how the flashbacks converge with the present. The conversation between the characters the reactions, the descriptions are very detailed and give a good picture in one mind. Good job, i very much enjoyed it and i look forward to more chapters.

just wanted to say that i really really love your story, its very interesting. i love the plot and of course sakura and sasuke. i really cant wait to see their feelings blossom. cant wait to see what is next

OMG :smirk: o nice plan Tsunade... >:D update soon~! please n' thnx!! here's a cookie for your troubles!! *hands cookie to AngeLhearteD* ^_^

Next chapter! Next chapter! Next chapter!

hi there, talented writer. just left a comment, but looks like it didn't get uploaded successfully, so i shall post this suggestion again.

this is a random suggestion for your kind consideration. in light of the dramatic mess (team 7 love triangle, impending confrontation & all) unveiled in recent manga chapters, and with your widely acknowledged flair for writing, was wondering... if you would consider doing a piece to address this situation...? it might be tricky... but it'd be a thrill of a read for diehard team 7 fans. perhaps from sakura's perspective... her feelings towards the 2 most impt men in her life with corresponding parallels on how these 2 impt men feel about her. something subtle, something heartfelt, something i feel is uniquely your style. could be an open ending... could be a sasusaku ending...

anyway, as usual, looking forward to the final instalment of this great series!