Haha, what an abrupt ending! I wasn't expecting that!
Excellent story, the twist about the 'dream' at the end was particularly entertaining, very clever. :)

Hah, Tom and Jerry, somehow I hadn't picked up on that earlier :')

lol i think what happened in the closet is amusing.

Sarah was an innocent so i feel bad about that but she's the one that dragged him off into the closet.

and if she'd stop acting like such a victim for a second she might find that she liked it XD

tbh i would have loved to have taken her place *giggles*

I've read this story a couple of times now and this was the first time something you wrote caught my eye. I know this is an older story, but I had to review. It's such a little thing, but, as an alumni, I have to speak up. Interlochen is not in Muskegon. It's nearer to Traverse City in Northern Michigan. There is a Fine Arts Camp near Muskegon. That would be Blue Lake Fine Arts Camp. I spent every year from 13 to 18 at one of those camps or the other and an additional year at 19 years of age as a camp counselor at BLFAC. Yes...I know...I'm such a picky little creature. I do love all of your stories, though. You definitely have the gift of the bard.

Spartie

That was an interesting ending to a very angsty story.

I must confess that there were sometimes that I feared the two would never settle their differences or come together (at all). Becky was an awesome character though. I really liked how she was able to figure it out. It was a very nice story. I liked it.

my god... this story made me sad and happy at the same time... Awesome

Jareth is a Bastard... but then, we all knew that already. He just reproved it. Is that a word? Anyways, bastard, but we still like him...sorta. -keeps reading-

loved it too cute

great story

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great ch

loved it

loved it

now what will those two do ..great ch

so mean