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proud-yaoi-fangirl 2008-08-24 . chapter 1
You are truely and amazing author. The angst and saddness was so real, I cried. And I love the way you ended it with the slight humor about being Uke... it brought things to a happy end with a sence of normalcy restored in their relationship. ^-^ I also love how you made Sasuke OCC without it being overbaring. It really was beautifully written
Love allways
B-chan
Mystical Machine Gun 2008-05-23 . chapter 1
The beginning was lovely; the angst could be touched with bare fingers, the sadness...I truly felt everything :D The ending with the uke thing...hmm, personally the story did not need it. You convey the feelings wonderfully, but keep it simple like in the beginning - that way the story stays coherent and "the same". What I means is, you are good at writing about frustration and sadness (I love those themes, maybe you've noticed ;D) - keep that up and if you want try something else, alter the little thing slowly :) I liked this one :D
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