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| Estrella85 2008-10-07 ch 2, | abuseRead a lot of vamp fics before and this is on a pretty good level, but it'll be even better once Sora (and therefore the readers ^_^ )start getting some answers. Great job and hope there's more soon! |
| Angry Girl 2008-08-19 ch 2, | abuseI repeat Sora's question! lol I am so looking forward to knowing what the heck is going on. The first chapter was amazing you really drew me in, Sora was so lonesome on his quest to just get away from the stares away from an enviroment that was oh so simalar to the one he lived in on a daily basis, except happier. Then to be drawn in by a stranger who seemed to know a lot, not being able to keep his head straight. And the turning! the scenes with Riku were very well done as well, It was oh so easy to see this through Sora's eyes. I bet Riku had been watching him for quite awhile in the club. I laughed when he mentioned he'd been watching him 'oh that explains everything' hehe for how long though? or is that in the next chapter? Axel! how come he went from 'no way in HELL?' to 'hmm I've changed my mind.' is it because Sora interests him or he knows who Sora is? wants to annoy Riku? I'm curious to how that will end up really. Artemis also makes me smile, I don't doubt he can be deadly as he has shown with his facts. But it's funny lol I also felt sorry for Sora and his poor ears. That is going to take some time isn't it? I'm also curious about Cloud and what he is up to he's got a role in the war... double spy? or double cross? Sephiroth made me shiver. But then again it is him. You've got me hooked :-) happily waiting for more whenever the update time rolls around |
| tr1ckydr1v3r 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abuseNice story, please update soon, i know it'll be good? |
| lietothedevil 2008-08-08 ch 2, | abusethis is quite different from other vampire stories i've read so far. it's good. |
| Astharoche 2008-07-26 ch 2, | abusenice~ but im not to sure on the axel thing-y that he got with sora TT-TT ...idk just that sora is riku's and stuff ^/^` buut still great work please update soon!! ~_- |
| Astharoche 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseoh nice~ FINALLY! sora is a vampire too!! gosh is always riku the only one it gets me ** off!! great chapter keep the good work up! |
| Lolita Lilyette 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abusex3 I like this. I'd never read the first version (I think), but I adore this version. :D I love the length of the chapters, and how each part is written. I'd love to see this updated even more! |
| Kyrene once Blood Roses 2008-07-23 ch 2, | abuseAxel! I'm so excited now! At first I was like " oh, that's cool", then I started reading the 2nd chapter and the story is rushing back to me. I can't wait to see what you do with it. Have I mentioned how excited I am over Axel? Keep Going!! |
| Rikkamaru 2008-07-22 ch 2, | abuseit seems really cool and cute. please update soon. ja ne! |
| vincents-loverffall 2008-07-19 ch 2, | abuseAwesome story. Poor Sora, being bombarded by all these sexy males! Is Roxas going to be in this? And will it have Axel/Roxas in it? The pairing Axel and Sora seems...weird! Lol. Anyway, awesome writing. Cant wait to read more. XD |
| Ghostly Green 2008-07-19 ch 2, | abuseGaah! SO COOL! Definitely adding it to my favorite stories and story alert list! Please update ASAP! |
| Naruta13 2008-07-18 ch 2, | abusewot yaoi ad vampires my fav. things together, poor sora, just "partying" and then turned into a vampire suddenly and confused as hell, *hugs him* |
| Bronze Eagle 2008-07-16 ch 2, | abuse*massive, shiny puppy eyes* So, you're going to update this fic soon, right? The next chapter will be out any minute now, right? ... Pwease? Seriously, this is really good. I'm enjoying meeting the characters slowly, finding out what their positions are in this world, and also the slow reveal of the world of vampires and werewolves itself. I'm getting strong flashbacks to the vampire RP I was in last year, too ... basically I'm impressed by your characterization, writing, plot ... pretty much everything. Also, this line: "Because holy **, his life was suddenly filled with attractive men who seemed to take an interest in him, and he had no idea why" made me seriously crack up. |
| Chronos Mephistopheles 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abusepls update soon. this is really well written and I can't wait for more |
| Silver Butterfly07 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuseExactly my question...urgh, poor Sora must be super confused. After all, no one's told him a thing except that he's a vampire. Riku will have a bunch of explaining to do if he wants to keep his new fledgling happy. I do like it--and the appearance of Axel makes everything better! ^^ --Silver |