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| Itachi's aprentice 2008-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseOMG, That was awesome. |
| SadJack 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseVery Nicely done. I would like to see more. Keep it up. Aw no sequel? |
| slytherensangel26 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuselol...no sequel needed! |
| Animegod 197 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseVery long, insightful, and steamy. I like this fic, but I pretty skipped over the more detailed parts as I'm still not too comfortable reading raunchy ** scenes even though I've read a few lemons before. Still good story though. I love the Tommy/Kimberly pairing. |
| x.Redd.Phoenix.Flamez.x 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. Nice job!! |
| jps1926 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI loved the different approach you used with this story. Although we didn't get to witness their 'moment' in the bed, we can pretty much guess what went on. And I loved the line "... then you, me, Ben, and Jerry have a foursome in bed." Too funny. I think you have too many other great stories that are in progress to do a sequel for this one. This is a perfect one-shot. |
| rose19586 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseWow!! I loved it!! It was sexy, sweet and hot!! I hope you update soon the rest of your stories!! Ohh and like SYuuri I also think that maybe you could do a sequel of this one??please? Rose =) |
| loulou4729 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was so spicy! Very well written though. I loved the part when he said that 'beautiful' was only in high school. You are one of the best Tommy/Kim writers of adult fanfiction I have ever seen. I love your other stories as well. |
| SYuuri 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I have been asking myself..when would we hear from Shawn? and BAM! You gave us this one! It's a wonderful writing, just as always. Though maybe you could do a sequel.. please?? :D |
| pinkywriter 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great story. Hot, steamy, sexy - everything that could suffice an errotic fic like this. Great job. :D |
| grits 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseum...wow i love it *fanning self* that was hot i love your stories, and they are always hot |