It's amazing, I really want to read more!!

did you need to end it there?

UPDATE!

oh *hug* love where this is going..please update soon!

Love it! keep going! & more JIBBs please!

Oh no I hope Ziva's going to be okay!! Excellent chapter!

Yea dead body in the front hall probably doesn't go with the decor.
Excellent chapter!

Awsome chapter!

Love Maryy
xx

Am so glad you updated hun! Loved this chapter major twist lol go Ziva!!

Cant wait for more xx

All you have to do is get Abby and McGee together now... :P

You're doing a good job. I like Lily, is a sweet name.

Keep going, your story is interesting. Two families at NCIS.

This was a very sweet chapter.

Please keep going, you're doing well.

excellent two chapters! Very well done!

Aww yay Tiva & Jibbs!! :)

I love how they are all happy with their babies, Please update soon with more family life for the two couples :)

Ohh so cute!! It is good to see them together, especially Tony and Ziva as parents, and Jenny alive!! I'm gonna miss her...
Anyway, continue!!