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Reviews for: One night under the moon
Divine Princess Mir
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
Poor Miroku. He doesn't want the ladies anyway. If he would just admit he wants a silver haired hanyou.

I just love how you wrote him in this fic.

Loved it!
Charity322
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
I like Jakotsu with Bankotsu (and Miroku with Sango), but I have to admit if you went by degrees of perversion Miroku and Jakotsu would be the perfect match lol. Both of them are always thinking about sex. :D Neither of them are particularly bright when it comes to knowing when it's a bad time to hit on someone either.

I thought you got the group dynamic of Inu's group down well with Miroku getting slapped by Sango and Inuyasha backing down from a smart remark when Kagome glared at him.

This one was hilarious. Miroku totally ignoring logic in favour of deciding that Sango had come to fulfill his fantasies, Jakotsu's total obliviousness to the fact that Miroku might be nervous around him because oh I don't know he tried to kill him and his group earlier lol, the whole stick up the butt thing, Inu's reaction when Miroku comes back covered in lip paint ...

Would be interesting to see what happened between Ban and Jak over Jak's obsession with Inuyasha. He can't be happy that he's spending all his time trying to seduce another man.

I'm starting to write an essay so I'll shut up now. You're probably tired of getting reviews from me lol; I think I read most of your stories over the past few days. Ban/Jak is a pairing it's hard to find many decent stories for, for yaoi everyone's into Inu/Sess. I read some of them as a very alternate pairing (I like Kagome/Inu and Sess/Rin), but I totally lost interest when I found Ban/Jak. They have no incest to look past, no weird demon thing that allows m/preg which squicks me out, and I could actually see the pairing really happening in canon which I like. Which has nothing to do with this story ... *slinks off*
Sakura Sango
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Oh neat story! Though poor Miroku! I think he may not go anywhere by himself for a while, just to be safe. haha!

Nice story! I liked reading it!
Flacutono
2008-05-09 . chapter 1
finally i got a perfect moment for reading this... it was lot of fun, sexy and cute :) and as always, you write beautifully. Jakotsu/Miroku is not my thing, but you made it fun. points for that! you rule! ^^
Ranuel
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
Poor Miroku! It's a wonder he isn't scared for life.
chocolatemaltesers
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
slightly creepy... miroku and jakotsu... 0.o
Pineapplelicious
2008-04-11 . chapter 1
Oh my god poor Miroku ha ha ha this is soo funny.
Well he got laid by a guy that looks like a girl that's a bright side. *laughs*
Umm ya good story liked it nothing I see wrong. ^^
nrrg
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
O_o Wow... I assume this was the fic you'd been telling me about, ne? Good fic. A bit disturbing, but still well written as always. :)
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