Just picked up on this story. I'm well pleased to see a novel-inspired Starship Troopers fic, especially one so nicely written. Well do I know the difficulty in stitching together scenes into a true narrative. But you're doing well. Please update soon. Don't abandon the work.

So very excellent. only a step below the master himself. I especially like the way you reinvented the tanks, using them as special purpose weapons, not main combat armor. Very well done. The only thing is that i fervently wish it was longer. Thank you from a very sincere and grateful heinlein fan.

I am very impressed with this writing. It's actually so well written that I am considering it a sequel rather than a bit of fanfiction. Your work is very similar to Heinlein's. I like how you put quotes before the actual chapters. I hope you continue this story until it is completed.

Suggestion: Include flashbacks about Juan being in school or in Raszchak Roughnecks.
Include interactions between Fleet and the MI. Although short and few in numbers I enjoyed the chapters of Starship Troopers that had Carmen in them.

This is very excellent though i wonder where did you get the name for General Takeda since I also have a General Takeda in one of my stories as well.

Very interesting. I like it so far. Your replicate Heinlein's writing style pretty well but also add something of your own. I hope the plot picks up, and your chapters are too short, but it was good. Nice to see a fanfic based on the book and not that Godawful excuse for a movie.

I was curious what you to be "controversial" about the book Starship Troopers? I do not disagree with you that it is a fine book but I did not find it controversial. I have lost track of how many times I have read this novel...

you picked up just where the book left off. nice :)

Awsome!! I hope Rico has a hot chick somewhere!
PLz, update!

Wow!! This is great i just read the first chaptor and i loved it!! I've been lokking for a good starship troopers fic for a while, and i finally found one, Great job, keep it up!
If u know of any other good ones plz tell me!