Please Finish This! Please! Please! Please! Do I remind you of someone? (Goku) I love Hakkai! I don't really like him gay but I like your writing and I like this story please continue!

I love the twists in this! Excellent job!

Ha! I'm really enjoying this--can't wait for Sanzo's reaction when everything comes out in the open. Hope you'll keep writing!

I wish you would update this. So much. It's been a while since I've read/watched saiyuki and now I've gotten hooked all over again because of this delight of a story. It has a really nice flow and is easy to read (in that it doesn't make my eyes bleed from bad grammar, spelling and structure... Which isn't all that often on :D).



(Also Wam is awesome, just so you know >.>)

Interesting storyline. Anticipating the development of the story. Please update soon. :)

Hi! I'm really enjoying this story! ::snrks:: I am especially amused by Hakkai thinking he's gotten away with the snuggles and Goku and Gojyo freaking out. Can't wait to see more!

Cool story! are you going to update soon? I can't wait to read!! Who was that prest and did he really mean sanzo was a demon or just hating him like everyone else?

You know it's funny, I always end up empathizing with Gojyo when reading your stories, for whatever odd reason. I loved KF, so I really hope you continue with this one as well. The start is already perfect for me, you've set the mood really well. It's entertaining and if it continues to be 83, you've already hooked me by the fact there's no lust involved. Or cheesy pick up lines. Geh, now I'm venting.
Anyway, may your muses lead you back to this for all 83/38/whatever fans. :D

I'm really like this story. When I first started reading the very first part of it I was thinking, "Is this Sanzo and Hakkai or a couple?" Uh, pretty much both, I guess. I'm excited to see where this is going, so I hope you update soon!

I love this story. I love the relationship between sanzo and hakkai and the progression from Keeping Face. Please, please update. I have to say, this is one of the best Sanzo/Hakkai fics that I've come across on .

Wow, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I personally have nothing against boyxboy pairings and the such, but for this story I would actually rather just see it as an attraction sort of thing, more platonic than romantic between any of the characters. Regardless, I love this story so I hope the next chapter comes out soon!

You caught the characters' voices wonderfully, and the talks between Hakkai and Sanzo are fun to listen in on. Plus, sneaky Hakkai makes me grin. Are there going to be more chapters? *Hopes*

I've been following this story from the first chapter of Keeping Face, and I like this. Really nice. Just wondering, is this to become a Sanzo/Hakkai-ish fic?

I'm really liking this so far, but I'm a little torn. I dislike reading pairings between the boys, but I loved the previous story so much that I started reading this one anyway. Will the pairings become more... graphic, or will I be happy to keep reading?

Oh. I love 38 83 pairing. no 39 93, pretty please?
I loved keeping Face. so glad you made a sequel.