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| sam2loved1s 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abusei like the last sent. “You owe me a new stereo system Roxas,” Zexion said ruining their fluffy moment. |
| DisasterTones 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseAhh this is good fer a oneshot, but it would be better put into parts! I did a oneshot like this for death note, and then I put into parts and It was so much better. If you do, talk more about how they met, how they all fall for eachother, go more into Roxy's thoughts before he attempts his suicide! Best wishes, And tell me if you might turn this into parts :D -DisasterTones |
| Dragonfire411 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseNice story. I'm working on one as well. Check it out when you have time. |