they're so freaking cute together! OH MY GAH!

lols its pretty funny xD anyways good luckies with your future stories!

this is gr8 and cute!! it's really like eriol to get on to the phone tht way. i really like the plot . gr8 and keep it up!

hm... i think you should have written their emotions and what they are thinking in the part when Tomoyo told Eriol that she loves him.

Nice plot though, but I think the story moved a bit fast.

Try learning about using point of views. Erm. Don't be mad thought, constructive criticisms.


-critiquo-speaking

ohh so cute! Eriol allwyas been the gentelman he is!!
Malu D.

it good and cheesy...but i like it ...

Not bad. I like it.

that's one of the cutest ExT fanfics I've eva read!
i loved it!
the last line is so...natural. i loved it!