This was a really wonderful story! I love the gradual and unsteady progression of the relationship between the characters. For a one-shot, this was a very satisfying story. I was initially surprised about their daughter. I was thinking, "How the heck does Kagome have a child by..." and then I remembered that one encounter earlier in the story. XD I'm kinda slow like that sometimes!

Again, beautifully spun tale. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire story!

What a wonderful story. Sad... but happy and full of determination. Interesting to see Inuyasha with Rin. I wonder what happened to Shippou and Kirara/Kilala. I am surprised Kagome never asked about Shippou.

Thanks for writing!

Oh I liked that - it made me feel all bubbly inside =D

I liked the idea of this fic. The title I found very apt and very alluring too. It was good.

Oh. I really love your last line.

Very moving story. Even though it ended well I still felt sad that Kagome had to go through so much before she found happiness. Well written.

This story is awesome! I was a little sad that Kagome's miko powers weren't as strong as they were before, but I understand why that is. It was awesome to see her put into a different role and her being a kick-ass cook is awesome! Well done!

This was a cute story. It was much more than a one-shot; more of a little journey in and of itself. The characters were able to evolve and learn, even in the restrictive environment you provided (cut off from almost all other characters, original or otherwise). I think you ended this fic in the right place though. To continue would have meant you might not ever stop. ._.; I'm glad they were able to stay together. And though it seems a little rushed, it makes sense, however fairytale-ish the situation my seem.

I really liked this fic and I hope you will/are continue[ing] to write. *goes to check your profile* ^^

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

that was a very interesting story :D
i enjoyed reading it
the characters weren't that oc and their portrayl was good :)

why three years ? I didn't all understand, I think.

but, it was a so beautifull fiction. a bit sad sometimes. and the surprise of Mika.

bravo !

great story.

WOW I loved this, I usually don't read such short stories but this one was just perferct. Job well done.

OMG that was fricken beautiful.

How lovely. This is a lovely jewel in your crown without flaw.

Thoroughly romantic, gentle, and exceedingly well thought out.

Rather nice.

It has been an honour to read it.

EP

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?