Dude, I LOVE YOU MATSUDA!

This is so INTENSE. I almost broke my computer table when I started banging on it. GAHH

I hope you can update soon!

I, uh, I seriously have no words to say except for well, update. I mean like this chapter made me actually feel sad, like the heavy feeling on your chest kind of sad. It was just plain brilliant, exceedingly brilliant. I love this story so damn much, it has an amazing plot, the characters are in character, the emotions displayed and everything that is said is just really touching. I absolutely love it. Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update soon.

Oh, my God. By all that is holy, please update this story. Poor, poor Raito. I wonder what he was thinking, though, when he chose to tell the world to catch the kidnappers rather than tell them what little information about the kidnapping/ers when he had access to the camera. In for a penny, in for a pound, right? Ah, sorry, I know real life can be a bitch, but I'd really love to see more of your work.
Thanks.

I love this! it's so well written and very entertaining. I'm really looking forward to more, I have to know how it ends! :)

hot damn, i was wondering why this fic had so many reviews, but now i understand. great writing and plot so far, can't wait for the next update :)

H-holy shit... Holy fucking shit.

I have to say, this is quiet a brilliant story and you a brilliant story teller. I am in suspense at this very moment, waiting in anticipation for what's going to happen. I feel dread and horror for Raito.

I absolutely love how you portray both Raito's and L's emotions. Raito has always been my favorite and your version of him as a strong-willed, determined, "ice princess" is amazing. His growing insanity and L's growing affection and worry.

"I feel violated."

Wow. That line made me shiver. That simple line, but the impact of the situation he was in puts it into perspective. And then he started to sing those lullabies and I almost started tearing. And the box he was trapped in at the end. I can imagine him just going insane, laughing or crying or both just to hear something.

Anyways, that's it for my review. Brilliant story, as I said. Keep on writing and please update as soon as you can. :)

Hi *waves*

I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.

Good luck & happy muses

Zhan

omfg, this is absolutely AMAZING shit! love the plot and writing, hope to read more:)
~arya mianto and itachi

I love your story. and please. please.please update soon. :)

I really hope you someday update. This is one of my favorite stories and it makes me sad that it was never finished.

You are a great writer. :)

This could be a movie dude O.O
Seriously, you have to continue this! its amazing!
And very.. worrying.
Did you research insanity?
Did you think over what it takes to lose your mind for days?
Whatever.
Im going to story alert this, just in case you are re-inspired to continue it or whatever.
This is the second death note fanfiction with an incredable plot line thats seemingly been left to drown...
=[ *great depression*
If you update, I will literally send you something in the mail.
Like £50 or something.
All i need is an address baby.
All i need is an address.

This story is amazing! I would love love love an update! You keep me at the very edge of my chair.

Absolutely spectacular. *lets out breath*

I read the first two chapters of this story towards the beginning of the year, and I can honestly say I'm incredibly glad you updated!!

I can't wait to see what comes next!

Until next time -

Jessica

By the end of the chapter 3 I wanted to scream just as loudly and terrifying with Raito. The silence is whats going to drive Raito mad and I feel so bad for him, for what they are doing. They are breaking him apart and its so heart wrenching and terrible and yet I want to keep reading. I found your story on Adult and I saw on your profile that you had a link to fanfiction so I came here to see if there were more chapters. I was happy that there was more to read but at the same time appalled what they were doing. I had to close my eyes when they cut angel wings into his face. I can't imagine what Raito's father must be feeling, thinking. It must be absolutely terrifying, hopeless to see your child going through this torture and not being able to do anything.

Speaking of not being able to do anything when Raito stopped talking to himself and there was that moment of awareness in his eyes when he knew what was happening and he couldn't do anything about it, I wanted to sob. Seeing what you are going through what you are becoming and being able to escape and do nothing about it apart from the torture, starvation and humiliation must be killing Raito. I forget how young he is too in this story. He's only 14 years old before the pre-Kira Deathnote thing, it isn't fair for him to go through with this.

I thought the singing-the terrible, off key, cracked voice singing was more disturbing than the talking to himself but then the end of chapter three and the screaming...I don't know what made me want to cry more. I really hope L finds him soon, I don't know what else Raito can go through before he has a mental breakdown but it doesn't seem to take very long. His kidnappers seem to know how to push him to his limit. It makes me dread what they are going to do next. I hope they don't rape him. It doesn't seem to be the pattern of the kidnappers to do that but imagine what will happen if L saw that or even Raito's father. Oh dear god...

Speaking of his kidnappers not to glorify what they are doing but I was amazed when they sent their first public announcement, I was amazed at how organized they were. To be able to steal thirteen children from the top thirteen countries and all children of top officials. They have a lot of guts and genius to be able to pull it off. They killed two innocent children so I hope L catches them and puts them to justice and helps Raito.

I am so happy that Matsuda figured out the things with the cello cases. Hopefully this be the first step for L and his team to find and rescue Raito and the other children. At least before Raito is driven crazy and more innocent children are killed. I'm jumping ahead but I hope that when Raito is rescued he gets to meet L, since L seems interested in Raito and he determined to rescue him. Oh pleaserescuehimL. (sorry saying a quick prayer) I'm sorry that some bad things happened to you at the beginning of the year but I am happy you are better.

I don't normally read Death Note fanfiction but I started reading this one and I couldn't stop. So congrats on getting me hooked. I really hope you update this as soon as possible. I want to know what happens next and I am glad you are going to continue this. Good job and sorry for the book long review. Hope to read more later and I can't wait to see what happens to Raito (I hope he gets rescued or comes out okay!) Thank you very much and see you in the next chapter!

If I was not in a hotel right now, surrounded by people trying to sleep, I would scream as loud and for as long as I could. I don't think I'd ever stop.

Oh. My. God. This is horrifying. And awesome. Why is there not another chapter.

The screaming in my head won't stop, and at the moment I feel eerily similar to Raito. This fic is driving me CRAZY.

~J