 Harpers 2008-08-29 . chapter 1This was a an interesting poem. The perspective changes were well-paced, and most of all, I like how Sakura expressed doubt in her willingness to accept Sasuke back in her life. Although she loves him (even if she denies it), I don't think she would ever throw herself whole-heartedly into a relationship with Sasuke after all that has occurred between then.
"Betrayal is hard to let go, he should know." That one was the emotional stinger, my favorite line.
And the ending was well done. There's no definitive outcome yet, but the door's at least open a crack for possibilities (Sasuke and Sakura work out in the end, that is my optimistic hope). |