 AmandaTheVampireLove 3/16/05 . chapter 1-blinks- Aww... you know, actually, this right here could develope into something EVEN BETTER! (Its good) heh, but this could honestly make a great story of obsession and lahhve (Phantom of the Opera... sorry) Anyway, this is wonderful... off to read more of your things! |
 kaio 5/20/04 . chapter 1 interesting... _ |
 The Crazy Cricket 3/23/03 . chapter 1*Raises quizzical eyebrow* You're right, it doesn't make much sense... but really, what does? _ Ah, well. It makes you think, and that's a good thing |
 DeandraJavan 4/16/02 . chapter 1hmmm... i've read all your posted labrynth works so far... and i am quite astonished with your use of words... my vocabulary is seriously lacking(not that i don't know alot(alot's not a real word is it?(am i even allowed to use parenthesis inside parenthesis?)of words, i just never use them. i love how you describe things... i hope that you continue with your writing... and if you were ever to publish a book, i'd be one of the first ones to get it... love ya! |
 Redaura 3/28/02 . chapter 1nice one. bit confussing... but hey. it was a bit short...other than that, loved it. |
 Tango1 2/21/02 . chapter 1Dark and haunting loved it. |
 Antoinette 2/14/02 . chapter 1 Love it. Know the feeling (my first love is trapped in my unconscious and I don't think I will ever set him free!) |
 Ever Be 10/3/01 . chapter 1confusing, but nicely written, you even spell faerie write. i'm a sucker for the right spelling. can't wait to read more |
 Ravensong 10/2/01 . chapter 1Absorbing and well written. And not too short at all. |
 Silver Space 9/29/01 . chapter 1hmm a bit confusing but a good story over all. |
 Alicorn 9/29/01 . chapter 1All right, but could be fleshed out a bit:) |
 Lovely Psycho 9/28/01 . chapter 1 I suppose since I've read all of your posted fics thus far, I should be so kind as to commend you on your works. And as redundant a compliment it is, with each piece you prove you have more than a fleeting grasp of the language, and your manipulation of it is more than breathtaking. My desire for you to continue sharing your stories goes without saying... but just in case, please do. |