woah this is deep...

totally confusing but im eager to figure it out.

Heya! I am Reading my way through all Labyrinth stories and stumbled across this jewel. I love your story but I've seen you haven't updated for quite some time. You haven't given up on it, have you?

I'd be happy if you would continue this!

I know it's been years since you've done anything new, but I just read the first chapter of this, and it's a very interesting premise.

Rats. I was really, really hoping this story would not be unfinished. Is there an ending to share, even seven years later?

Wow. That's about all I can say. You have a way with words that I envy. I'm glad I discovered this gem and look forward to reading the rest.

Oh I really like where this is going... wow. Deep deep story. Very awesome. Major props! Please update! -Clare

I would love an ending if you still have one in mind. I figure the story is abandoned after what seven years, but a girl can hope. Oh, and I am loving your Loki character. I hope he doesn't stay separated from Sarah for the extent of her stay.

This story is amazing. Great characterization of the two of them, and fantastic creativity. I noticed that it hasn't bee updated for several years! Please, please, please consider adding one final chapter, just to give the readers some closure.

its been over 4 years, is this story dead? or still on hold, I'm deeply curious about what happens next.

I want an update...(

This is such an orginal story! Its different from most J/S plots and i hope you will update it...one day. If not i'll just keep reading it!

wow, you really need to update, do you know that? it has been 4 YEARS! UPDATE NOW! I COMMAND YOU! Don't make me sick my action figures on you!

Man... Loki reminds me so much of Jareth... it's crazy. haha, funny thought... what if Jareth IS loki? That would be funny. Cuz they are just SO much alike.. it would be interesting though...

Wow, this is just...incredible. The way you've managed to create such a vivid, and brilliant world is just simply amazing. I just cannot get over the fact that this is so well written! Especially the way you have the storyline set up: it's just more twists and turns every chapter, burying the reader deeper and deeper in this world you've created.

I really, really love it! I just cannot get over that fact! The way you write and especially the content of this fic, well, it just doesn't compare to others from this same movie. And you are right, change is a key factor. So the way you introduce and expand on that theme is just perfect and so inspiring!
And the dialogue...Oh, the dialogue! I sincerely LOVE the way you've got the characters, including your own creation, interacting with each other and having there relationships grow and change and interweaving until you've got the reader fully sucked in. I'm completely hooked, plain and simple! This is just beautiful, and worthy of being pitched to other readers! Superb!

Well, judging from the last date that you updated and other instances, I guess I can assume that you've dropped this story. And being the fanatic that I've become in such a short amount of time, I'd really like to know the ending of this fic! You mentioned that you've got an idea of how everything ties up somewhere, and I was wondering if maybe you'd be willing to send me a rough draft, or even a summary or something that would describe the end. I just REALLY love this story! Please consider my request, and if you do, my email is
holyseraphim (at) gmail (dot) com

Well, this has been a very good read. It was original, it pulled me right into the action, and it kept be wanting more until the very last words. I hope you never stop writing such amazing work! Hope to hear from you soon!

Div

First of all, i'd like to sincerely thank you for the simply spectacular story you have written so far. I watched Labyrinth for the first time this weekend (why yes, i have been living under a rock!) and was instantly hooked. This is the first labyrinth fanfic i have read so far, and i have the feeling i'm going to be sorely disapointed with the rest that are out there. You have spoiled me with for "normal" writing, since yours is anything but. You were able to draw me into the world crated by your words so thoroughly that i nearly jumped out of my skin when my roommate tapped me on the shoulder after trying in vain to get me attention for a full minute. Your characters, even (especially) your OC, came to life to me, seeming to live and breathe from the screen. The gradual maturation of relationships and characters is nothing short of genius. I literally can't remember the last time i enjoyed a fanfiction this much.

Judging from the amount of time since you've updated, and the more obvious clue of the "on hold" note, i'm going to assume you've really abandoned this story. I'm not going to yell at you, or criticize, since i have no idea what is going on in your life at the moment. However, you did mention in a previous chapter that you knew how this glorious work was going to end. I was wondering if you could possibly email me, letting me know what the ending is, or if you have a rought outline or something on your computer, that would be even more spectacular.

If you aren't able to get back to me, i understand. I just wanted you to know how much i enjoyed your writing. You have a gift, and it would be a damn shame for you to let it moulder in a closet. Even if you don't continue this particular story, i sincerely hope you continue to write others. Thank you for sharing your work with us.