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| skipgunner 2008-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseJust read this. It's amazing. Truly beautiful. |
| Obsessed Pam 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusePoetry in prose - so beautiful. |
| trecebo 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting juxtaposition. I couldn't decide between sailing or painting with the pictures you evoked. Both work and are quite appropriate for the scene you created. |
| TeylaFan 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHow sad.. :( Great writing though, and I still liked it :) |
| rubycaspar 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseSo powerful and sad. The ending was wonderful. |