this is very cute :) I can't wait to see where this goes :)

awesome! Can't wait 4 more! PPMS :)

kewl. *story alert*

Cool. This story definitely has potential, but I want to see more from you. I want to see you up your game! After all, as writers, we must always strive for perfection.

While I was reading this, I picked out minor mistakes in capitalization. Just be sure to pay attention to what needs to be capitalized. And I believe it’s ‘Brainiac 5.1’, not Brainiac 6. There’s nothing wrong with it, I’m just going according to what he’s called in the comics…and if the darned show actually had a third season. Curse you, KidsWB! CURSE YOU TO HELL!

Anyway. I want more. The prologue was good, but to short. Update soon, and I’ll keep (Flaming) reviewing you! Good luck!

>;D

Nice I love it! ^^ Hee hee keep it up!

I love this! Wonderful season 3 for LOSH! I can't wait to see the next chapter =]

heh, it's Brainiac 5.1 not Brainiac6... heh

nice story