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| Persephone Kore 2008-07-03 ch 3, | abuseThis was a lot of fun to read. I like your analysis of the stories from Lestrade's perspective... and of Watson, too. |
| E Phoenix 2008-06-03 ch 3, | abuseI almost died when I read Watson and Lestrade's exchange at the bottom of ch 3. Lol. Soon he'll be sleek and satisfied. XD The insight that Watson, though brutally honest about everyone he writes about (with the exception, perhaps, of women) is always harder on himself. And he does write as if he is a ghost, trying to reassure himself he is living. Brilliant fic. =) |
| Susicar 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseOh, this is so good! You write excellente, and you make a new universe, centered in Inspector Lestrade. I think you are the first writer here (and i assure you this site is plenty of excellents writers) who "make Lestrade justice", like we say in Spanish; you portrayed him like a "live" chap, with blood and flesh. Congratulations, this fic become more and more deep and interesting. "If Holmes is trying to tattoo the corpses again, I don't want to know about it…" Love it!! |
| Susicar 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abuseExcellent! I dare named you "The Lestrade Official Writer", you has done very, very well with this guy (I adore him, too) "then Sherlock Holmes was surely the most infuriatingly precocious scion of the family" "A shame no one ever thought of recruiting feisty old widows for law enforcement" Brillinat! |
| bcbdrums 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abusewow. i had to make myself read this when i saw it wasn't one of the cliche fics, but i'm so glad i did. you write really well, and your character analysis is amazing! |
| Kadigan 2008-04-24 ch 3, | abuseDon't know why I didn't review this before. It's great character development -- a side of Watson we haven't really seen, and all the Yarders plus originals. Awesome work! Do keep writing! |
| KaizokuShojo 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseInteresting chapter! Nice job. :) |
| smallrose 2008-04-16 ch 3, | abuseAw, why'd you finish this? I want more! |
| Deana 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter! I can't wait for 4! |
| pebbles66 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseI have been an un-registered reader up till now, but I had to register so I could leave you a review on this story. I loved this story. Watson is my absolute favorite and I loved the insights into his character that Lestrade perceived. This was one of the best characterizations of Watson soon after the war that I have ever read. I see that you have marked this "complete" but I hope you'll reconsider and write more soon. |
| rabidsamfan 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseI printed this out to read on the train ride home, and I think I confused some people by laughing out loud at a couple of places. Watson walking into the hospital and taking over a patient under the noses of two rival surgeons is delicious. And knowing as much street cant as any Scotland Yarder! I think Lestrade may have figured out parts of the puzzle, but he's definitely still got a long ways to go. (Which is great, because it means more chapters, yes?) |
| KCS 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuse*nearly faints with satisfaction* Oh, you could continue this for years and I'd never get tired of it! Seriously, I've never in my life seen such a wonderuflly done insight into the early Watson, and I love it dearly. I'd fight Mary Morstan for this Watson any day of the week! Most people can tell by my fics that he's my fav by far, and seeing him through this unique viewpoint is simply amazing. From the helping the chap in the hosiptal to the boys to the two addicts, this is a fascinating read and I love it! |
| clevergirl 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseSUPER fun story. I really appreciate your careful use of the Canon quirks to MAKE the story (and the unique mystery that IS Holmes & Watson)happen. Love that we finally get inside Lestrade's skull and see the boys from his perspective. I look forward to reading more of your work! |
| Susicar 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I wait for so long for an original adventure. Here we are plenty of good writing,but after so many years the originality isn't easy of find (Sorry my language, i don't speak English) Congratulations, you make a magnific fic, i liked especialy the characterizations of the Yards (all of them)I hope you can write more like this one, and wellcome to this site. |
| smallrose 2008-04-14 ch 2, | abuseThat was really GOOD, could you please, please, please, continue it? |