This is funny! It's even better then chap1!

It made me giggle.

LOL!! I love your "Finding Fiction" Fics~! please tell me your gonna write another one~!

...interesting

Oh PLEZ write a sequel! Finding FIction 1 & 2 are both AMAZING

*Giggles*. Better than the first one, actually. So cute! The ending made me cringe, of course, which was great. The reasons D uses to excuse himself... Pretty similar to mine when I've read a yaoi and then feel completely ashamed of myself. So this was very realistic, too. I love it!

In fact, it's going on my favourites.

Actually I do find it funny. D's sentiments are like mine, 'It's not hurting anyone, So I'll just stay up all night and read mindless erotica! Yeah, insomnia!' and the ever-popular yeah-well-you're-no-saint-yourself reason.

Either way, it's very nice and easy to enjoy, and also easy for a person like me to believe. Keep it up.

XD As brilliant as your prequel, I enjoyed this one too. Very cute, sweet and funny. :) I love Leon's reaction, you'd expect him to get all angered and stuff maybe.. but this one suits him too. I especially like your characterisation of D, you write him very well. Good stuff!

o...its so cute
i likes lots!

lol that was great. Poor D

Hehehehe XD This is such a happy thing; made me smile... And I wasn't expecting it to be better than the previous one!! :D (because it is, know it!! XD)