Ha! I got the darn thing to work!

O.o Two Naruto references in one day for me. It's a conspiracy. Also, if you had said street RAT instead of BRAT, I would have mentioned Aladdin.

I'm a little sad that you have not updated in a while, but I can't really complain. -looks at her own fic- I know how hectic life can be. Plus, you've mentioned writing more than one fic at a time, so... Wowzers, you're very good at mulitasking, lol. I also have no right to complain since I read all of this today (and your e-mail will probably be bombarded, my bad) and didn't really have to wait like other people.

Yes! I found Morrigan! Ah-hahaha! And if Rebecca is constantly falling because she has an affinity to Earth...then I must not have an affinity to anything ;-;. I want spiffy, latent powers, darnits! -pouts-

"I waved his question aside and stuffed my pockets in my hands" - I did not catch that. I don't think that's a good thing O.o...

Also, I did not catch the FF4 reference... which is sad since I also have that game. -hunts for it-

o.o...I have nothing witty to say because Rebecca had nothing witty to say. And that ability would suck for me. I get angry too quickly. Granted, the anger is usually over something like somebody treating somebody else badly, or something of an equal moral injustice...but I still get angry too quickly. And I was right to assume I'd wind up wanting to stab Miss Jane repeatedly before too long.

Ah, the infamous dragon scene makes itself known. Now I'm going to feel slightly guilty when Saan ever kills monsters for awhile... But only slightly. Rebecca's not going to get that dagger back, is she?

I wish my dreams only had to do with Almighty Cookie...Sadly, I get chased by dinosaurs, volcanoes, twisters, floods and watch the world end. ...I'm not sure what that says about my mind.

I have a question: So far all the PSs have been 1's and 3's, right? Why is this? My Playstation 2 feels as if it is not loved ;-;. Anyways, DUM DUM DUM. Rebecca finds out the stakes have changed, how will she handle this new information? (Gah, that sounded like a soap opera)

The part about the plant farting Pollen had me rolling, and then when you mentioned it caused Blindness, I realized that I had completely forgotten that. Then again I AM at the end of the game, and the beginning is so ever far from it...Hm.

Oh, and Miss Jane seems quite evil, and I feel sorry for poor Primus. Even though I have no idea who he is; but, I do know WHAT he is -nods-.

O.o And you get attacked by a canine, too. Odd. Maybe I'm stealing brain waves from you without knowing it. Or, maybe Square just likes putting wolfish creatures in the first areas you visit. I found Rebecca's humor to be almost the same as before: very witty and very abundant.

Ha. I like how your Potions taste like oranges, and mine tastes like...well something very unpleasant. I got a little lost when it jumped back to Robin's point of view. Perhaps I should pay attention to those wonderful line breaks more often...

-waves at- I found you =D. Of course, it wasn't that hard considering that your name is the same on here as it is on the KVH Forum. Mine, however, is not. (Is the Saan.)

At first, I thought Zero was a PS2 instead of a PS3... Your writing style also seems a tad different in this chapter than it is in the forums...Then again, forums are exponetially smaller. Now, I'm off to the next chapter! Because I have no idea who Morrigan is. -nervous laugh-

My God! How dare you thank me for beta-reading! I didn't even beta-read! All I did was read it through and make stupid comments about zombies and killing Alma off. But oh well, praise is praise eh? 8D Hopefully people wont run away screaming too fast when I do actually post EGAD.

Moving along to an actual review! I'm not very good at these but whatever. [/Squall] I really rather liked the battle horn and etc you added in there, I think it gave it a something extra. Plus it's a wee bit creepy, but in a good way! Maybe creepy's not the word... sinister? That sounds better. Also I can't help thinking that they're carrying weapons of mass destruction, rather than just point mcStab weapons. That's probably just me though, because I'm psycotic.

Don't worry Rebecca, Morrigan's here to help, by horribly maiming you with arrows and kicking you into the dust! Yup, very helpful. Bite the hand which feeds you arrows! Bute it hard!

Ahh, I squee'd constantly whenever Vivi was about. You write him so squishingly! It's most marvellous I can assure you. He's so innocent, I hope the moogles don't lure him into their evil cult. I know they have one, I'm onto them. I reckon they wear armour to carry humans thrice their size so they can kidnap them and hold them for ransom. D8<

The name Lachesis totally gives me the shivers; it's oh so good! I do love the ineraction between your OCs though, it's fecking excellent. I hope there're more scenes with them in in the future!

Oh Rebecca! I'll give you all the warm huggly concerned-love you want! Plus I'm sure I give better hugs than a metal-clad noise pollutionist and a naive-as-a-gibbon Princess. Not being judgemental at all! Mwahahah! Anyway, seems she's getting pretty used to Gaia, will she ever want to return home I wonder?

You already know my opinion of Alma, so I won't go on.

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Kell et!

Moving swiftly on. Awesome chapter m'love, I do hope the next chapter comes soon.

Well, this was a funny and interesting chapter. Funny in the Rebecca sense, but... I like back-stories. A lot. And this one seems at once tragic and disturbing. Morrigan is looking awfully delightful as a character from what little bit I've seen.

And omakes are fun! Shame I've never written any to put up here. go figure. XP

So who was it dealing with Rebecca when she was in that other-worldly state? Clarity? Because I'm pretty sure that messing with another Avatar/Researcher/Developer's Expendable is breaking some sort of rule.

Rick also wants me to tell you that he's fine with getting a cameo. Rebecca just needs to watch out for the overly violent women and that one pushy slut running around. (Although how an SI that has no Avatar will come into play will be undoubtedly interesting.)

Ho- holy craptula! Steiner's being civil! And Zidane's being civil TO Steiner! I think I might have to help pinch Rebecca, there is definately something wrong with what she's seeing.

Ooh, this Morrigan gal. The plot thickens! I wonder what she's like.

I was always surprised that no-one got airship-sick what with all the bustling about it does.
Airplane food is evil. Evil! Hit it with a hammer! And the tea cost me £2.50! Ripoff merchants!

Oh dear, herioicness almost kills the Rebecca so it would seem. I do so love Black Waltz 3 though so I can't hold it against him, sorry! I'll catch you though Rebecca. D: Well, in spirit I suppose. You better appreciate the gesture though!

Ooh! New Game - Continue! I did not see that one coming. Awesomepie. How many continues does she get? XP

...What's an omake?

Hey there! It's me, AP, I just happen to be on my web browser that has this account saved to it, otherwise I'd being using my regular one. :P

Anyway... I'm finally glad that I caught up. Rebecca's power is amazingly inventive, an the fact that Jane is a PS3 amuses me. So, will it just be Playstation avatars involved, or will we get to see some from the PC/Gamecube/Wii/Xbox/etc. tribe?

And the omake idea sounds awesome. What is Mackenzie going to do?

(BTW, I have no problems with competent Steiner. Why do so many writers, myself included, write him off as useless? He's actually a very useful fighter in the game. Unless you get the cheat that lets you play with Beatrix, but good luck with that.)

I absolutely love how you're developing Steiner. And you're right, how was it that we all had feelings of hatred for such a character? He's not given much credit, but fortunately, you're redeeming his character.

And for the love of god, COFFEE. I forgot about that! D8 Dammit, well, I lost some awesome material, but hey, you definitely got that part down. That and the whole story development. ^^ I like how you're weaving the concept of the Expendables, 'The Game' and other parts to it. It's just really neat how you've done all this so far.

And yes, you're being bombed with reviews.

Enjoy it, because I enjoyed reading the material you've written thus far.

8D