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| epalladino 2008-08-14 ch 8, | abuseAnother great update. This is all so in character. Thanks, Beth |
| Aswen 2008-08-03 ch 8, | abuseThis was good, I liked this chapter a lot! Steve's finally awake! YAY! Update soon please! |
| lstladylake 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseYou're doing great! I'm really captivated with the story. I like the humor you slip in occassionally. It would be fun to think of Steve and Mark out on a double date with their ladies. Keep posting the chapters! |
| lissysue85 2008-07-30 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter and Mark has a date cool. Can't wait to see what happens next |
| AOK2 2008-07-29 ch 8, | abuseVery good chapter. Love what your doing and will be on the lookout for more..thanks, jude g. |
| Aswen 2008-07-27 ch 7, | abuseOh for the love of... Can't they just go find a cliff to fall off?! Update soon please! |
| AOK2 2008-07-22 ch 7, | abuseI just reread your whole story and I really hope you update and finish it...It's a very well written story and you do Mark and Steves' relationship real well..Keep up the good work...judeg. |
| epalladino 2008-07-18 ch 7, | abuseGreat update. Can't wait for more. Thanks, Beth |
| lissysue85 2008-07-18 ch 7, | abuseHi just found your story and it is really good. Poor Mark and Steve. I hope he recovers and helps Mark to realize it wasn't his fault. Please update soon. |
| epalladino 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abuseOoh, Damian and Tati are still around? Great update and I can't wait for more. Beth |
| smithcrafter 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuseAnother good chapter. |
| hotchner 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuseThat was a MARVELOUS Chapter. I hope that Steve lives through this. I hope also that Mark stops blaming himself for what has happend to Steve. With Steve's Girlfriend with him he will have somebody there who really Loves him. Keep up the AWESOME Writing. Can't wait for the next Chapter. THANK YOU! |
| Aswen 2008-06-28 ch 6, | abuseThat's better! A brilliant chapter without an evil cliffhanger! Loved this chapter! Update soon please! |
| epalladino 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abuseI thought I reviewed this chapter. Great update once again. And once again a great place to break off. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for the great read, Beth |
| Aswen 2008-06-13 ch 5, | abuseARGH! Could you have left it at a more evil moment? Answer: Don't try (Please!) Brilliant chapter! Update soon please! |