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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Lindsay was upset with Danny for what he had done. |
| Angel 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good. I was cheering at every word that Lindsay said! |
| nikki.02 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's...powerful. I love Lindsay talking back to Danny instead of just taking it in. Sounds like something she'd do and what she says is exactly right! Angsty, but it's great stuff! Especially the last couple of lines. |
| Bloomerellaroo 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOh how I wish the writers would have shown the first beach scene. I think she did go somewhere like the ocean to grieve, even if it isn't your scene didn't happened in the show. Thanks for your addition. |
| ReJo 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThe writers have made me lose respect for my former favorite character. I hope Lindsay tells him all of this. |
| PatryTrusky 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHi!! I really like your story. Sad in the end but great!! Good job! |
| JennCorinthos 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI am pumping my fists up in the air for Lindsay... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| Blue Shadowdancer 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so full of feeling. And Lindsay's exactly right with what you made her say to Danny, he's really screwed up right now. The last line was so painful. Amazing job. |
| sallyjetson 2008-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseOuch that hurt. And still Danny blames himself for everything as he should for this thing but still he's got a real guilt complex. I really feel Lindsay's venom toward him. |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHe really screwed up... I don't think he can fix this one... I hope Linds stays strong... great job! |