i love this story it is the best.

Ooh it's getting interesting

Now let's see if they can solve this mystery

so hunter's been affected too

OOH this is off to an interesting start.

Great story. I liked how their experience in the other dimension gave them new perspective. Great ending to a great story.

I loved the last chapter, it's so nice to get to know the other Blake and I really liked to hear his thoughts and his learnings from the time in the other world.

It's a pretty good ending, because you let us remember the things, which Blake learnt in the other world. He has truly grown up, that's for sure.
I like it, how he is replaying the events of the last time and letting us know about the consequences of his actions and Hunter actions for that matter. It's nice you also included Hunter in there and Blake's thoughts about him and his happiness. It was so fitting.

And I really adore the last part, how you let them met each other. It's really natural, not rushed or forced. It will be growing over time and I really, really like it, because it fits so well.

Hopefully they won't need as long to get to terms like a certain other couple in another world... But I have the feeling that Blake is a bit more... blunt. As you said before, regardless of which world, Blake will always "like" Tori (or more :P)

Trying to force it out never helps, it won't be satisfied in the end. It's better to wait until you are full of ideas and can write it down without difficulty, without struggling for words. That's making sense for me, yes. *shrugs* It's for fun after all, you have no deadline. :)

I'm sorry, I take so long for answering. Life was crazy the last time and I was busy.

I really loved your chapter, because that chapter was so... well it was a really fitting conclusion to the whole storyarc. It's nothing left to say for me :)

Yay! The picture came in and what a way to explain to Alt-Tori about the other dimension. I loved the conversation, and how although it was all from Blake's POV, it included his perspective on Hunter/Rachel, too.

I definitely enjoyed this story. Keep up the amazing work!

Aww... the story is over :/
But it was a happy ending. The right Blake and Tori fell in love :D

The fluffyness is too cute. I just love Blake and Tori together
awesome story :]

aw...
Hunter and Rachel getting married
:D
awesome story!

Yay!!
They switched back :D
I am glad, because I didn't want the wrong Blake and Tori to fall in love
awesome story!

What can I say? This was a truly beautiful story. You got the characters right, kept the flow moving and ended it with a nice, simple ending. Most authors only wish they could do that.

Great job, and I hope to see more in the future!

-CJ

super cute!

yay! Great chapter. I like how it wrapped things up, very interesting.