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Puggles Master
2009-05-26 . chapter 27
Great ending. Nice wrap up. I like that you supplied enough that as a reader, you're content to know everyone was safe and moving on to the next part of their lives. I like the suspense and tension added by the need for the rangers, essentially both Bridge and Devon to wait and see Syd and Zeni. Awesome story.
Puggles Master
2009-05-26 . chapter 26
Great chapter. I liked how they believed they were innocent due to circumstances, with the exception of Jacob. The scene with Jacob and Doggie was intense. I thought you did a good job showing the chaos that was unleashed as S.P.D. infiltrated the facility, the rangers still having to find a way to bring order and complete their given tasks.
TwinkieTUTUS
2009-05-14 . chapter 27
yay! cute cute. and a sweet ending. congrats!
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-05-14 . chapter 27
It's over?! No! Oh well, I love this chapter! Yay, Bridge and Syd are together! Sky and Z are the next project?

I'm sad that this is over but I'm glad that Bridge and Syd are together!

I wish to see more Bridge/Syd stories from you, and also more Sky/Z.

Great story! I wish i weren't over but I still love it!
Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever
2009-05-14 . chapter 27
How sweet!
Hot Pink Girl
2009-05-14 . chapter 27
aww...♥!!
I love it!!
The perfect ending for the perfect story!!
This story was so awesome it had everything I mean romance,action,drama,suspense and in the end love!!
I really like it how you make everyone have a happy ending even Devon!!
I really love the last sentences they really tied the story together!!
wonderful work!!
hope you make a sequel where Syd starts her next project!!
Love it!!
-xoxo ♥
JakeBlacksGirl
2009-05-14 . chapter 27
Aw a very sweet ending!
Ms. Fairweather
2009-05-14 . chapter 27
great chapter. It was a good ending, though I would love to see an epilogue! A bit down the road would be fun to see.
Puggles Master
2009-05-05 . chapter 25
Awesome chapter. The flow of the chapter heightened the intensity and suspense of the action. I liked the little moments taken aside to get into the ranger's inner thoughts, it was interesting because often in such intense situations people's minds tend to wonder, maybe not everyone's, but still. Moving on, my heart was pounding with all the small cliff hangers. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Bridgette Barrymore
2009-04-30 . chapter 26
I like this chapter, I'm glad they finally found Syd! I loved the part when Sky asked Z if she was okay. I'm starting to like Devon more and more. I hope Syd's okay. I also hope Bridge and Syd and Sky and Z will be together soon! And someone for Devon too :).
JakeBlacksGirl
2009-04-29 . chapter 26
YAY! Happy ending. Well... For now. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Linnea212
2009-04-29 . chapter 26
I loove it like always!
Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever
2009-04-29 . chapter 26
Love it!
rebeccaS
2009-04-28 . chapter 26
YAY! A Z and Sky moment! I am so happy! Can't wait to read more.
Ms. Fairweather
2009-04-17 . chapter 25
you're so evil...must you always give us such suspensful cliffhangers? Anyways, great chapter, I can't wait for more.
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