This was very interesting. :) I enjoyed reading every word of it.

i love jackie, i really do. and the reunion was extremely well-done. just emotional and romantic enough without being sappy.

intriguing... you've got me hooked already - though after the UU and your other HP work, i'm not surprised at all.

I thought it was great. Anything to fill some of the void the TV show leaves unfulfilled, particularly the romance part. So I would love to read more. Congrats on such an accomplishment and good luck with more.

I loved this story and I'd be thrilled if you wrote a sequel to this.

very well-written.

I loved this chapter. I loved how the Doctor told Rose everything and how it was he who volunteered to do the hard job by destroying everyone and how he told Rose that she was what pulled him out of it. Thanks for updating, but I'm sorry that this story is over, it was really good! I enjoyed seeing the return of Gallifrey.

I love this fic. The way you take old and new series cannon and tie it together is absolutely brilliant. I completely disagree with sarcastic 'n' silly; You fic is realistic and completely cannon. [Though, I might be biased, absolutely loving D/R fics]

I've already reviewed a previous chapter, but I have to say this again: "Never before has he so completely understood that he is the yardstick by which time measures itself. Say the words—and it is done. All that is required are his intentions, for he is the last." I LOVE that bit!

I would love to read the sequal for this one! Great story by the way!

Jenni

I loved this story so much! Your characterisations were perfect, and I was so happy to see the real doctor back together with Rose ^_^ I am definately keen to see a sequal.

I was scared to write this review because I didn't want it to be taken badly. I love your writing but this story just rubbed me the wrong way. It seemed like one of those fourteen year old girls who come on to the site because they don't like a certain event in the fandom and write a story that quickly and implausibly(?) changes things to the way they like it. The writing isn't that nice and the happy ever after is very neat and tidy.
I understand people write fanfiction to have things go there way but your conclusion doesn't look like it could ever fit in the world of Doctor Who.
I really do love your writing I have been reading the promises series since it came out and the reason I got this story is because I have you on Author's Alert. What one the qualities I love most about your writing is the realism it brings, not everything smells like roses. Maybe that was what disappointed me the most about this story. It just seemed like you wanted Rose and the Doctor together so badly you didn't care how it happened.
I hope this doesn't make you mad and even if it does I am still off to read the next chapter of Promises Defended (YEAH!).

Cool and I liked the pairing.

This is a really great reunion fic. I like how the story takes the Doctor and Jake to the Gallifrey and the Cruciform first, so making it plausible that the Doctor is able to navigate his way back to Pete's World, rather than just sending them there straight off. You write about those things so well; the universes and the war and the Doctor. I think I enjoyed reading those parts even more than getting the Doctor and Rose back together.

I loved it! I loved how the Doctor or Rose couldn't let go of each other and how Pete needed solid reassurance before Rose went with the Doctor. And I liked the description of the Doctor's look from Pete's POV. Thanks for updating!

Aw! Cute! =) And very well written, may I add. ;-)