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KaitsSlytherin
2008-06-05
ch 9,
abuseAre you guys going to do an epilogue? I want to know what Dumbledore was doing there!
Kait
P.s - Good job guys!
jasmeen
2008-04-24
ch 9,
abuseno offense but ur story sucked... your plot wuz way too short.. if you had made it longer it would have been a good story!
creative-writing-girl13
2008-04-23
ch 9,
abuseGrowls at Dumbledore! Why the heck didn't he help!
hpnut1
2008-04-23
ch 9,
abuseGood story and what was up with Dumbles at the end!
creative-writing-girl13
2008-04-22
ch 8,
abuseCan't wait for more!
Rainbow2007
2008-04-22
ch 8,
abuselove it
Rainbow2007
2008-04-22
ch 7,
abuselove it
creative-writing-girl13
2008-04-20
ch 6,
abuseI can't wait for more!
Rainbow2007
2008-04-20
ch 6,
abuseoh god i love it.
Rainbow2007
2008-04-16
ch 5,
abusei love it
KaitsSlytherin
2008-04-16
ch 5,
abuseGood luck on your test! I loved this, it shows another side of Sadie that Harry (and I) weren't expecting. I think you could have put a bit more detailed into the slap, and Sadies emotions, but I still love it!
Can't wait to read more!
Kait
power214063
2008-04-15
ch 5,
abuseis brian really their sibling?
KaitsSlytherin
2008-04-13
ch 4,
abuseI can't wait to see where you guys take this!
Kait
hpnut1
2008-04-13
ch 4,
abuseGood job.
MonicaBlack
2008-04-13
ch 4,
abuseThis story makes no sense.
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