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| faith bonksie 2008-07-16 ch 10,  | abuseoh this is so good please update soon I cant wait for more, and I think that the story is fine without Phoebe and Paige, your doing a great job. |
| peppymint 2008-07-15 ch 10, | abuseHopefully big Wyatt will step in to save his little brother. I don't want Chris to die. |
| Phoebegirl319 2008-06-27 ch 10, | abuseAh!! Love it!! Keep it up!! On the Phoebe and Paige thing, I think that IF you do bring them into the story they shouldn't play a main role or anything. |
| lovestruckbabe243 2008-06-26 ch 10, | abuseMan! The stories still really good! I'm like in love with it! I'm always checking to see if you've updated! I think I read all the chapthers(1-10) at least 10 times probably more! Keep up the good work! And Paige and Phoebe, are they going to be in the story at all! I love all the characters and I'm looking forward to Paige and Phoebe to come into your story! Really really good job! |
| DrewFullerFanLife 2008-06-23 ch 10, | abuseI hope you continue wit this story, I've really enjoyed it so far. |
| hermit hideaway 2008-06-23 ch 10, | abuseGreat story so far. I love Piper Leo family stories especially now that I've seen the 6th season with Chris in it. I am curious though if Phoebe or Paige are going to be in this story at all. Anyway, great job and can't wait for more. |
| lizardmomma 2008-06-23 ch 10, | abusevery good job |
| Gabwr 2008-06-22 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. Looks like the stupid elder is going to make a move soon. Looking forward to more. |
| lovestruckbabe243 2008-06-19 ch 9, | abusethe story is still really good! Please update soon I wanna read more! |
| lizardmomma 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abusevery good job |
| Shivani123 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abusevery cool |
| Jarri Scythe 2008-06-09 ch 9, | abuseVery good. From a cridict POV I like the way you didn't use " said " a lot. There were some things that could have been worded better but all together very well written. Reader's POV it was so sad. I can't wait for the next part. XD |
| Gabwr 2008-06-09 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter. Poor Chris. Watching your mother die has got to be one of the worst things in the world. Looking forward to more. |
| lizardmomma 2008-06-03 ch 8, | abuseI like it, good job |
| ksloan9142 2008-06-03 ch 8, | abusepretty good chapter it's less confusing than the last one |