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| kristina :D 2008-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is so good emily. i love how she faints thats my fav part=) i cant wait for the rest!! byee |
| FerventxXxMPGirl 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abusehahaha I really liked it:) It kind of reminds me of Twilight when Bella got sick from the blood. :D |
| ALEX ALMIGHTY! 2008-05-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseYeah, so... I've never heard of anyone who could possibly have fun in the nurse's office, but I guess you made it happen. Figures... You certainly do have a knack for doing strange things. And... OMG MARCHING BAND STARTS AGAIN TOMORROW! I CAN'T FREAKIN' WAIT! I GET TO PLAY CADENCES AGAIN! Can you hear Red Rum, cuz I know I can! How appropriate... well... WRITE MORE! Peace! |
| xlittlexKarix 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abusehey:) awesome so far i love how its like literally the school band, thats awesome. so yes i will finish reading this and see you tonight! great job:) lil' Kari |
| Elena <3s Alabama 2008-05-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh...btw i meant to add that i think "It's Just Us When the Crowd Goes Home" is a cute idea for a new name. Hm...i have an original idea for a new name 2 which is "Stranded with the Love of My Life" lol..kinda corny, but let me know what u think! |
| Elena <3s Alabama 2008-05-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseYea!! Really cute...it kinda reminds me of the Edward-carrying-Bella scene in Twilight...did u base it off that? Extremely cute though...and i can imagine Ira being that janitor watching Alyssa + Austin in the hallway. I was just wondering if u ever actually fainted, bc u described it pretty well, i understand if u don't feel like talking about it, but a good desc. if u haven't :) |
| charmedNluckyP3 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseyay! really cute chapter! you TOTALLY took that whole picked up by hot guy from Twilight, though. (i love that part!) anyways, yay! again! you get 2 each lunch with Austin! and me! OMG! i just rhymed! ok, i'll stop! i love exclamation points! just so you know! and i am...done so, yeah, write more soon is liz going 2 be in the lunch or is it just going 2 be other friends? can't wait 2 read ur next chapter! xoxo charmedNluckyP3 |
| Elena <3s Alabama (lol) 2008-05-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey Em! Love ur story so far...the coke scene was great comic relief 4 the awkward Nick converstaion in Chap. 2 and I |
| ALEX ALMIGHTY 2008-04-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseHahahaha that was really funny! This part I mean: "The bell rang. He let go of my shoulders. The bell sucks." lololol Very nice... Anyway... you have to put in a part when Heather and I recite the "Pledge of Allegiance!" It was actually her idea. So yeah... can't wait for more lunch. lol come to think of it, I'm hungry... so... hurry up! Okay, peace! |
| FerventxXxMPGirl 2008-04-24 ch 3, | abusehahahaha My favorite chapter yet. :) I can relate to the whole almost-fainting-because-he-winked-at-me part. lol, but it was more like heart-races-because-he-looked-at-me. Even though I know this guy REALLY REALLY likes me, but I won't get to that in a review, I'll message you about it later;) I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! WRITE, WRITE, WRITE! |
| charmedNluckyP3 2008-04-24 ch 3, | abusehi! that was really good and funny, of course! i could totally see u saying all of that stuff and the wall part was cute ttyl! xoxo charmedNluckyP3 |
| theartistformerlyknownasgia... 2008-04-21 ch 2, anon. | abusehey emmy emster! i read your thingy and finally figured out how to review! its actually really good! its reads like meg cabot, ya dig. you spell "here" wrong, though, in the beginning of chapter two. mention alex is number 5 in our class! totally dude! this is great! who is the palmer girl supposed to be? gym teachers daughter? o yeah fiction. fiction loosely based on reality. love it! keep it coming!! |
| ALEX ALMIGHTY 2008-04-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey Em, I just wanna say that I rock! ^_^ I have finally made my big time marching band fanfic debut in your awesome little story. Well... surprisingly, I actually have an important part in this whole thing. I don't like this Michelle person, and she doesn't even exist! lol Looking forward to the next chapter. Well, the black-clothes Buckcherry Nirvana miraculous genius girl is now going to take the time to say, "May the force be with you!" TTFN! |
| controlledbysoftball 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abusehey emily theres one thing i have to ask. why the hell am i not in here yet!? im such a huge part of your day how the hell could you just not put me in the 1st 2 chapters you jerk. you put josh gianna liz and lauren but no beth i mean seriously i better get a main part lol. after all those football games last year you can just not put me in these 1st to chapters. jerk. update soon you ** =) lol (jk. in case you were wondering) |
| FerventxXxMPGirl 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseI like the idea of "It's just is when the crowd goes home," And good second chapter! :D |