woo!!

well i liked ur story great work! keep writing

Omfg this is so amazing ur amazing! I loved it it made my heart stop and it's not really OOC lol. It made me laugh becuz "who doesn't like tacos??" and lol "Screw jolly ranchers; they were just a starter" lol

o wow that was just to cute!

Cute... Was Sasuke implying that he was a starter when he said Jolly Rogers were for starters?

hehehe that was so kawaii and romantic and funny!

Omg! Yay! You posted a story. :)

That last line was really cute. Hehe, cool idea, too. Jolly ranchers are yummy!!

I love how at the start you made it so she ALMOST got the kiss, but didn't. That built some "romantic" tension. :D

~SpacePirateGirl

P.S. Write more stories!! I love them!!

really good

Aw!! That was adorable!! And fluffy too! My favorite!! Plus, Jolly Ranchers are godd!! ^^

haha sasuke is such a dork.

AW! Really funny and cute! I love it when he tells her he likes blue raspberry :D

God I feel like Kakashi reading Icha Icha!
Absolutely love it!

Nice way to get Sasuke and Sakura to kiss. Also Naruto's trick was so classic.

nyahahaha...that was cute!

Cute. I want some Jolly Ranchers now :p