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| Kajolownsyou 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was great! Even if you made it a little longer it would have been good, but still really fun to read. It was interesting seeing how it might have been from Tina's perspective. During the movie, the audience tends to forget she must've gone through a lot of pain. |
| Fangirlofrandomness 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was so sweet! You know, in the deleted scenes of the movie, Karan Johar says that the beginning scene was actually going to be a sort of song (to the tune of Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aaye) while Tina's baby shower was going on. With that piece of information, I am of two minds about whether you should make a second part to this fic or not. Your ending was so beautiful, I really don't want you to change that, but I wish the baby shower part was included as well...maybe you could try putting it in before the ultrasound part or something like that. Why is it that your fanfics just seem to get better with each one, while mine seem to grow even worse?? |
| MissOtisRegrets 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuse*lengthy Oh* Ooh melikes. That was very nice!! I kind of want more, but it's so conclusive it seems a oneshot. |
| soccersmileyGRL16 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusei liked it, i think you should expand until the delivery. |