what the-..? ... i thought you at least would clear the 'investigation' they were doing.. well i didn't liked the final but i DID liked the fic xD even thought it was really short compared with a single chapter of growing up

But you use your colon everyday! I'm not sure what it does though...

wow, i really liked it. is there a sequel? if not, u should make one.

awesome fic

though i don't particularly enjoy squealing like a fan-girl, i couldn't help it

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XD it turned out great! I loved it! It was so... so... lovely! Good job, Ed-san!

Oro the Pedo, huh? I couldn't agree more. Yea, i'm going to kill him for mocking Saso-sempai! NO ONE MOCKS MY TEACHER! NO ONE! not even my uncle! ESPECIALLY not my uncle!

Of course. Deep down, deep, dep down, WAY down, he loves Hidan.

Just like me XD

The fight scene was good. Don't even worry about it.

HA! I was RIGHT! The thunderstorms DID have something to do with the killings! But that doesn't explain how the little (not) yellow weasel (hehe, Itachi) got the people in the forest. Surely they didn't just walk into it of their own accord...

XD yea the storms are getting a bit repetitive. But that's okay, I like thunder. It's awesome, like this story. Cha.

Bahahaha Saso-sempai you have pink hair i laugh at you. Ha. This was a good first chapter! I LOVED it!

That was a great fic!

I enjoyed reading it. 3

wah! Deidara protcted his little Sasori-pie!

so cute, i can't wai8t to read the next chapter!

seeya lady!

That was a great chapter.

I loved it! Though despite the few errors, I think it was an amazing fanfic. It was cute, but not too mushy, and you did a pretty good job keeping the story exiting and fluffy!

I also couldn't help but laugh at your little 'fluff bunnies' comment.

You truly are an amazing author, and I wish you luck in future fanfictions that you may write!

P.S. I'm not 100% sure, but I think the term is spelled 'biiju'...forgive me if Im wrong D':

aw*fangirl squel*