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what the hell was THAT? o.O
I think this fits better as a drabble... :S

Lol. Poor Kazuki.

I was wondering when somebody was going to write something like this! You are going to continue this aren't you?!

will this have more? it seems short... but im encouraging it to have more.. not because of the scene.. but it expands what yunoki really is...

ahaha..

i like it.. its a bit of a cliff hanger...

Just like Sophomore, well done.
It is the Bad nicely done...Oh, and, loved Hihara in this one:)

om my gosh! I can imagine Hihara's face of suprise xD
To make out with your sister, another OMG.
Is that what really happened??
Nice beginning. Surely gets the attention of the reader. (;

If you don't mind, would you like to read my fanfic about La Corda D'oro as well? I need critics. hehe. Loads of 'em.

Thank you!