great fic!
(just wish it was longer.)
btw i enjoyed it and am looking forward to more stories by u!

This was a pretty good fic and the first one from 5 I've read. Great job :)

One word;unique.

I like your take on a normal person turning into an Orphenoch,and really made it a person.Having their own personal opinion,feelings,characteristics,it's so alive that you'll feel sympathy when she got killed,while in the series it looked like some random people being monsters and was never heard of again.

I really like your works.Keep it up,okay.