good good good AWESOME! just keep on going, going, going, keep on writing, writing, writing...i'll stop now.
~sakura

Hmm very interesting, I always like these type of stories, so I'm intrigued about what will happen please continue!

James. Hmm love him, hate him, maybe a little of both. You are doing a wonderful job with this so far. I hope you will be able to continue it. It makes me sad to see great stories that seem to have been paused for quite a while.

Wow, your story is so eye catching. I wonder what's going to happen to Sylvia, and how did James become a vampire? Cant wait for more!

You are such a great author. Please Continue! I was always wondering about James's Past, and so far, it could be his past. He was hopelessly in love. What happened to Sylvia? What did he bring over from his human life to make him a tracker. I love your Stories, and I would love to see you on the shelves of Borders. I know I would be a big fan!!

it sounds good, please update soon :)

sounds really good, imma read on now

Good last name for James- Hatch. Another well-written chapter from Lily Turtle! While I LOVE Rose Thorns, this is a refreshing view of a smaller character within our beloved Twilight Saga. Sylvia is very intriguing. I hope to learn more of her soon.
As always,
Chelsea

Possesion and possesed had a great prologe cant wait for more!

a story about James, This is VERY rare. Are you a fan of him?

writing about James' past was a great idea... i'm excited to read the rest.. and the first chapter was great!

Ooh, it IS scary. I like it! Heheh. Definitely will r and r for this one. I want to know who "Syl- her" is. Tell me now. Update soon, love you, great story, blah blah blah.
Peace out homie,
C-dog

i like this.


if ya need any help with the death, gore, and generally gothic horror themes, feel free to come to me! me and my llamas seem to specialise in them...

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!

=]Em