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| mrazfreak 2008-06-02 ch 5,  | abuseLMAO "(Mini-Jude says hi to the world)"! I was rolling on the floor for a while over that one. Anyywayys, I like how this is progressing. Update soon! :) - mrazfreak |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-06-01 ch 5, | abuseGuess what? I like this. I like Michelle, in particular. She's funny. And so is Max with his crazy self. Your writing style is so different from most peoples, but I love it! Keeps the story fast-paced, energized, and fun! Keep updating! Much love ~TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 Oh, and the fact that the only French Jude knows voulez-vous coucher avec moi ce soir makes me giggle. I guess a I know a little French myself...or perhaps I just listen to Patti Labelle =D |
| JainaZekk621 2008-06-01 ch 5, | abuseI like this, I can't wait to read more! =D |
| JainaZekk621 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseThis was good! I like the ending of this chapter! What does that mean? -> ‘l’ androgyny vous va’ Plz continue! =D |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseThanks 4 updateing!More soon.. I love it! |
| JainaZekk621 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseThis is great so far! I can't wait to read more! =D “AYE AYE JUDEY!” Max exclaimed. |
| mrazfreak 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseUpdate soon! :) - mrazfreak |
| Cattiechaos 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuse“JUDEY" That was freakin hillarious xD Update =] |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseWow you should totally update! I really like Max wakeing up Jude! Funny... |
| teeny xoxohh 2008-04-13 ch 2, | abuseits pretty good..keep writing i really like it |
| JainaZekk621 2008-04-12 ch 2, | abuseThis story is great! I can't wait to read more! I think Max and Jude are hot in the movie. =] Plz continue soon! :D |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-04-12 ch 2, | abuseOh, honey, Max has been mine since I saw the movie in November. But I'll occasionally share ;D. Let's see...your Max is good so far. This is just a question; because this is PostATU, is PTSS (Post-Traumatic Stress Syndrome) going to play a factor in this fic? Don't change your entire story if it's not, just wondering. I realize it's only two chapters into this story, but can you give us a little more background info on Michelle? All we know right now is that she's French and she's been abused. What's her personality like, what makes her tick, etc. etc? Just a few suggestions, please update soon! Much love ~TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 |
| teeny xoxohh 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseits pretty good..keep writing, i wanna kno what happenes :] |
| amatorius48 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseDefinately interesting. you got me curious, I'll be watching :) (wow that sounded stalker-ish!) |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseSHEESH! Huge explosion of Max/OC stories lately!! Which is definitely not a bad thing. Good start, no critiquing things so far, so keep up the good work! This looks interesting, and I'm eager to see where it goes! One question, where does it start? It seemed like it started somewhere between after "If I Fell" but before their crazy Dr. Robert's party. But if JoJo left, that means it's "Oh! Darling," but Max would be in Vietnam...? Ah, just tell me, would you? =D Update soon! Much love ~TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 |