the story looks promising keep writing i enjoyed every second of it :] you have great grammar unlike some other stories.

continute, please!

i love this story!

I love the passion, held in, the dialogue which feels very true to the book. Sometimes when FF writers put in too graphic language it moves away from the underlying intensity of the original novels.

i hope that you're going to continue :)

i really like it! looking forward to the next chapter :)
good job lol

Lol I like it so far, keep writing please! xx