Love it!

now that was sweet! Loves it.

This is the perfect ending! I don't think Toph was OOC, as I said, I think Toph is just a 12 years old girl, and she can feel "weak" of her feelings, because her inmaturity and inexperience but to know your feelings about someone and to express it is a sign of maturity and strenght. I loved this fic, and the way Sokka pray to Yue's for the good of Toph was beautiful. Keep writting great fics like these! :D

that was really truly beautiful. It's interesting that she still doesn't really get why she's feeling weird (which would be because she likes him).
I guess that's how some first crushes are. That's how mine is anyway.
great job. I hope you write more!

nice story! =)