Now this is what I'm talking about. Although I don't believe they hate each other, there is a fierce rivally. This lso helped me see how they should react a little for my own GGX fanfic I'm making soon. Good work.

*pur* i love this. *sees no yaoi in it, a plus..but rather a true expression of what had to be exactly what those two were thinking* perfect. all of your work is perfect... *purs again and snugs her kysama* you're one of the few people i can actually enjoy yaoi from, btw O-o; you write it so it still remains in their true character...anyways. great fic, i love how you get inside their miindss ;) *thumbs up*

Ooh.. I can find yaoi in this! Good characterization.