God, you need to be famous. Please. Write a book and publish it for me, so everyone in the entire world knows you're in high company with Hemingway and Sue Monk Kidd and Arthur Golden and all those other awesome people.

Is there anything you'd like for me to do, as a reader? Do you want me to critique your writing? Do you need me to show your writing to my friends? Do you want me to beta? Do you want me to ... to draw you fanart, or make graphics? Do you need me to assassinate anyone? Do you need interesting book title recommendations? Band/Song title recommendations? Anything, for my current favorite author on the net. I am so in love with your writing. So, so in love. Why? Because it made my heart burst open and it alleviated the ache by this void in my chest. I've been so uninspired, so bored and so unsatisfied, for so so long. Those three stories I read today (altogether in one sitting-- Come Inside, Ab Ovo and this fic) became the highlight of my monotonous day today. You made me tear up at least once in each of the last three fics of yours that I've read, and I love crying for fictional characters. Thank you so much for writing.

AARGH. After the anime, yeah. Painful, yeah. But it still makes sense. Lovely, of course.

Though at first I was confused and didn't get it, I eventually understood this and I think it's beautiful. I can imagine Kaoru's guilt clearly, but I am glad Haruhi is there to help him bear it, even though it's her and him being with her that is sort of causing the guilt. Great job. Maybe you can write a non-angsty KaoHaru in the future? I would really like seeing that someday, if you want to write it.

I like the way the story is broken into pieces.

That was beautiful ... so achingly sad. I love it.
Very well written.

Wow, that was very emotional and I could imagine Kaoru's guilt over having Haruhi while Hikaru had to have an arranged marriage. The format was very interesting and I loved the meloncholy mood about the entire piece. Well done.