I simply LOVE this one-shot! It always makes me smile:) It's just adorable! Especially when they were hyper! LOL! I think Daddy was cute I mean they ARE little so it makes sense.

Since you're doing a 100 one-shots for Cloud and Aerith if I am correct? You should so do more ones with Roxas and Sora. There just aren't enough of them out there!

Well anyway, LOVED it!

OMG! so kawai! loved it! and did you get the sora and roxas idea off angeljeanne's earth and sky moments story? thats also super kawai! I loved it! are you a clorith fan? I am, I espically liked the way that you did the bit at the end, with cloud pulling aerith onto his chest, so romantic, just the way clorith should be! plz reply, and maybe write some more little KH clorith stories? pwetty pwease? ^^ bye bye now!

OMG! how cute! :3 poor Cloud, got so tired, but he made a good choice. I wonder what that bed time story was. Maybe he could have told them about his journey with aerith

ROTFL!
Brilliant! Sora and Roxas are devils in disguise ^_^. I loved Tifa and Yuffie as well! xD
~Beeria

this fic is one of the cutest fic ever >.

That was so cute! Poor Cloud. He can stand up to Sephiroth but he's no match for two little kids. XD

Will you write more for this fanverse? (^3^)/♥

Haha! Awesome!! I removed that challenge from my list so I didnt expect anyone to write this but i love it! It was so cute! Just like how I imagined! X3 good job and thx for choosing my challenge!

Roxas and Sora were too cute! Yea, i can't see cloud saying 'daddy' either, but it is a funny thought!:)