it's to god!

please update soon!

please?please?

So the guy who attacked is somewhat an illegal magician with a very high rank! I like it, but there are so many characters, I can;t keep track of them! Maybe thats because I don't want POT often. next chapter please. :3

The plot is good, but I think you might need to explain what they do in the MSP building more. What's their purpose and all. So far so good. *reads the second chapter*

the plot really is exciting but i think the story's full summary is needed. to tell you the truth, this is the first time i ever read your story and what i need is more information... like for example what really goes in the building. what are the respective sectors and what do they do and are they even on earth? this is a wonderful sci-fi all that needed are more information and please quit on the question marks as replacement to the character... it is annoying

Hm, I like the Character intros and the plot very much. The grammar can use some help. But all in all, it's great!

this is...good. very exciting, update soon!

but it'll going to be a bit hard to remember everyone's ranks and sectors...still, this is AWESOME!